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    a formal e-mail

    Hi, my name is Zohre i'm trying to write a formal email to a university office asking some questions. I'm fairly new to this site and I don't exactly know how it works but I was hoping to post my email here and get some feedback. So here is my email :

    Dear Sir/Madam

    My name is Zohre Momeni Nadiki. I would like to be admitted to -------------------------------PhD program.


    I am an MA student at -------------------------. Currently I am working on my dissertation in the field of Intellectual Property Law.


    I would be grateful if you could guide me how to find a supervisor.


    Thank you.


    Sincerely.




    Thanks a lot.
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 30-Oct-2015 at 09:46. Reason: Improving format and deleting three unnecessary exclamation marks.

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    Re: a formal e-mail

    Quote Originally Posted by hebezh View Post

    Dear Sir/Madam,


    My name is Zohre Momeni Nadiki I'm interested in applying for admission to the XYZ . I would like to be admitted to ------------------------------- PhD program.


    I am an MA student at -------------------------.
    Currently, I am working on my masters dissertation in the field of intellectual property law.

    I would be grateful if you could guide me how to find with finding a supervisor at your university.


    Thank you for your help.


    Yours faithfully, Sincerely.


    Zohre Momeni Nadiki

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