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    #1

    Could everyone help me to fix below the sentence?

    Delivery staff:
    - Check the package were moved from Saigon to Dalat.
    - look for a package to passenger
    - give the package to passenger
    - Write the information about package(name, phone number, address... of passenger) to ship to passenger in da lat city(shipping to home)
    - I go to shipping by small truck with driver together.

    Thanks...

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    #2

    Re: Could everyone help me to fix below the sentence?

    What exactly do you want fixed? There are three sentences and two phrases and there are problems with all of them.
    “Every miserable fool who has nothing at all of which he can be proud, adopts as a last resource pride in the nation to which he belongs; he is ready and happy to defend all its faults and follies tooth and nail, thus reimbursing himself for his own inferiority.”

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    #3

    Re: Could everyone help me to fix below the sentence?

    fix all(sentences and phrases)

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    #4

    Re: Could everyone help me to fix below the sentence?

    Quote Originally Posted by Lê Thiên Hoàng View Post
    Delivery staff:
    - Check the packages were moved from Saigon to Dalat.
    - Look for a package addressed to the passenger.
    - Give the package to the passenger.
    - Write the information about the package (space required here) (name, phone number, address (no ellipsis here) of passenger) to ship to the passenger in Da Lat city (space required here) (shipping to home).
    - I go to shipping by small truck with driver together. I can't fix this sentence because I have no idea what you mean.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lê Thiên Hoàng View Post
    Please fix all of them (sentences and phrases).
    I have attempted to fix the 5 sentences in the original post. I can't understand #5 though so you will need to explain it to us using different words. They don't seem like a logical series of instructions. Are you sure you mean "passenger"? "Customer" seems much more likely.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Could everyone help me to fix below the sentence?

    Perhaps in #5 you mean "I will go with the driver, in the small truck, to deliver the packages"?
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    #6

    Re: Could everyone help me to fix below the sentence?

    Oh, It mean is customer. Thank for all.

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    Re: Could everyone help me to fix below the sentence?

    Quote Originally Posted by Lê Thiên Hoàng View Post
    Oh, It I meant is "customer". Thanks everyone. for all.
    The set of instructions still don't seem very logical. The first 3 suggest that the customer is there in person. Suddenly, it changes to a customer who needs the package shipped to them at home.

    See my corrections above, marked in red.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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