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    Need Music Video? No money?

    Hey guys,
    I am not really good in English, and I am writing facebook post right now:

    "Need Music Video? No money?Send us your track! We will write you back, discuss all details, meet and shoot an amazing music video for free!
    ONLY ONE spot, do not be late!"

    Can you please check and rephrase this few sentences so they sound better?
    Thanks in advance!

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    Re: Need Music Video? No money?

    Quote Originally Posted by Ruslan Seyidov View Post
    Hey guys,
    I am not really good in at English, and I am writing a Facebook post right now:

    "Need a music video? No money? (space here) Send us your track! We will write you back contact you quickly, discuss all the details, meet you and then shoot an amazing music video for free!
    ONLY ONE spot available - do not be late don't miss out! Apply now!"

    Can you please check and rephrase this these few sentences so they sound better?

    Thanks in advance! Unnecessary. Thank us after we've helped by clicking on the "Thank" button.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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