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    Queries email to the University

    Greetings,

    I need to send an enqueries email to the university that i wish to attend. Please help me for correcting any grammar and writing mistakes.
    Dear Sir or Madam,


    I am now at my high school's final year and i wish to attend International Foundation Diploma at the University (university name). I need a lot information about the programme, so please answer my questions below :


    - What are the entry requirements for the student from Indonesia?

    - How much tuition fees for the programme? Are they included additional fees such as module, enrollment fee, student ID card, etc?

    - Do i guarenteed for a place on the Undegraduate degree after i finished the program?

    - How much fees for living in campus accomodation? Are they included additional fees such as TV License, laundry, or even arrival and leaving fees?

    - Approximately, how much living costs for living in (city name)?

    - How is about Moslem facilities in the city? Where i can found places for prayer places and Halal foods?


    Thank you.


    Best Regards,

    (My Name)


    Thank you for your consideration.

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    Re: Queries email to the University

    Quote Originally Posted by Aisha1103 View Post
    Greetings,

    I need to send an enqueries email to the university that I wish to attend. Please help me for by correcting any grammar and writing mistakes.

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am now at my high school's in my final year of high school, and I wish to attend apply for the International Foundation Diploma at the University of ABC (university name). I would appreciate need a lot information about the programme, so please answer my if you can answer the following questions: below :


    - What are the entry requirements for the students from Indonesia?

    - How much are the tuition fees for the programme? Are they included there any additional fees or charges, such as for special modules, enrollment fees, student ID card fees, etc?

    - Do i Am I guaranteed for a place on in the undergraduate degree course after I finish ed the foundation program?

    - How much are the fees for living in campus accommodation? Are they included additional fees Do they include charges such as TV license or laundry charges? , or even arrival and leaving fees?

    - Approximately, how much what are the monthly living costs for living in (city name)?

    - How is about Moslem Are there Muslim facilities in the city? Where i can found can I find places to pray for prayer and places and to eat Halal food?


    Thank you, and my best regards,

    (My Name)


    Thank you for your consideration.
    I didn't know what you meant by "arrival and leaving fees."

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    Re: Queries email to the University

    Thank you based on what i read on the websites or prospectuses, some universities put charge when students arriving or leaving accomodation. Maybe for administration purpose? or welcome service? i don't know.

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    #4

    Re: Queries email to the University

    Can you provide a link to an example of that please?

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    Re: Queries email to the University

    Aisha1103, please remember that you must capitalise the word "I" every time you write it.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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