contiluo
Member
- Joined
- Apr 12, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
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Last Sunday afternoon, while I was walking along a river bank, a boy was swimming in the river in the sunshine. I originally thought that he was just frolicking in the water, but he was sinking. He shouted loudly for help, so I immediately plunged down the river to save him. When he was helped ashore, I told him, “Don’t you see the sign ‘No Swimming’ over here?” “Sorry, I didn’t notice it,” he answered. After my blame for his fault, he promised to be more careful and would never do it again.
Last Sunday afternoon, while I was walking along a river bank, a boy was swimming in the river in the sunshine. I originally thought that he was just frolicking in the water, but he was sinking. He shouted loudly for help, so I immediately plunged down the river to save him. When he was helped ashore, I told him, “Don’t you see the sign ‘No Swimming’ over here?” “Sorry, I didn’t notice it,” he answered. After my blame for his fault, he promised to be more careful and would never do it again.