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    Post I need help on the grammer

    Hello,
    I have to write a common for my friend persentation and I am not sure about the grammar.I would like to check with you before I send it to my friend.
    Thanks,

    Hello Group 2,
    Thank you for sending to me your presentation. I read your (PowerPoint, Newsletter and Handout patients and I thing I have some commons which is.
    First I have a hard time to read the sentences in your PowerPoint because you guys are writing a capitalize letters and also font type is not clear. I thing if you use the Time New Roman it will become better.
    I think you need on the first slide of your presentation the outline that helps the audience to be focus on what you are going to present.
    I realize that you do not have a picture on your PowerPoint, which is good for attracting the audience to be focus. You need also to include video in your PowerPoint as well.
    For the Newsletters:
    I am not sure about the second page what is this information for? . Otherwise, I like the first page of the newsletter.
    The survey:
    I did not see question number #2 on the slide.

    please respond to me as soon as possible.

    Thanks

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    Re: I need help on the grammer

    What do you mean by "I have to write a common"?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: I need help on the grammer

    I mean by a common that I have to see my friend presentation and figure if they have any mistakes and let them know,so they can change it.

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    Re: I need help on the grammer

    Do you mean a "comment"?
    “Every miserable fool who has nothing at all of which he can be proud, adopts as a last resource pride in the nation to which he belongs; he is ready and happy to defend all its faults and follies tooth and nail, thus reimbursing himself for his own inferiority.”

    — Arthur Schopenhauer

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    Re: I need help on the grammer

    Is your friend's presentation some kind of homework assignment?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: I need help on the grammer

    Yes it is homework assigment. Yes I mean comment.
    Is my grammer above correct?

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    #7

    Re: I need help on the grammer

    Please let me know about my mistakes because I have to submit my comment today.

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    Re: I need help on the grammer

    I'm sorry, but we don't help with homework assignments.

    Thread closed.

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