Lumia625
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- Joined
- Jul 5, 2015
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Hello,
My teacher told me to write a composition for him. I wrote the composition below. I want to know is my composition grammatical? Would you please assess it and mention my mistakes? I did my best job to write a perfect composition but don't know how much I was successful :-D
Thank you in advance,
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Looked at him and said: “Are your children blonde too?”
“No, just one of them is somehow white” He smiled and replied.
“Is it because of your wife?” I asked.
“Yes, my wife is tanned” He responded.
“You should have married a white wife” I said, “Just a few Aryans are living in Iran. They should take care of their race.”
“I agree with you” Replied the taxi driver.
Frankly I didn’t perceive if he agrees with me why he has chosen a dark skin woman! But don’t know what happened that I decided to explain more about Aryans.
I started giving an account. “You know what? Aryans were some people who immigrated to Iran from southern Russia 3000 years ago. They were white, fair-haired like you. Some believe that Aryans are superior and I strongly believe in it. How about you?”
“I absolutely believe in it too” He seriously answered.
“They could manage to rule the whole world nearly 1000 years.” I continued, “Establishing such a great Empire isn’t an easy job. But a bunch of lizard eaters ruined all that glory.”
“Unfortunately” He responded sadly.
I told myself that this man is a patriotism rather than a religious person. Anyway we discussed some about race and the future of the world. I can’t remember that how did our discussion margin toward Yemen crisis.
“Do you know why Saudi Arabia encroached on Yemen’s boarders?” He asked.
“Because of Houthis.” I answered, “The emergence of a Shiite government in Yemen will strengthen the resistance axis in the region. Obviously Saudi Arabia can’t tolerate this condition.”
“You are wrong.” Said the taxi driver, “Let me clarify something to you. At this moment who many of us don’t care of the Imam of Time, some commanders in the Pentagon are planning to martyr him.”
“What a rot! Who said such nonsense words?” Interrupted his speech I uttered.
“Nonsense?” He laughed and said, “Hopefully you know that two Apostles of Imam are from Yemen and Saudi Arabia is afraid of them. That’s the reason of the invasion.”
Became dumb after hearing such weird elucidation! Couldn’t believe that such a purebred man has got these poisoning ideas.
Paid the fare and left the taxi.
My teacher told me to write a composition for him. I wrote the composition below. I want to know is my composition grammatical? Would you please assess it and mention my mistakes? I did my best job to write a perfect composition but don't know how much I was successful :-D
Thank you in advance,
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Bullshit
The outside was cold. Hurriedly packed my bag and left the home. During walking on the route I was reviewing my assignments. Finally got the taxi station. Took a taxi. Casting a glance at the taxi driver, I Buckled my seat belt. I knew the taxi driver but not elaborately. He was a fair-haired man with hazel eyes.Looked at him and said: “Are your children blonde too?”
“No, just one of them is somehow white” He smiled and replied.
“Is it because of your wife?” I asked.
“Yes, my wife is tanned” He responded.
“You should have married a white wife” I said, “Just a few Aryans are living in Iran. They should take care of their race.”
“I agree with you” Replied the taxi driver.
Frankly I didn’t perceive if he agrees with me why he has chosen a dark skin woman! But don’t know what happened that I decided to explain more about Aryans.
I started giving an account. “You know what? Aryans were some people who immigrated to Iran from southern Russia 3000 years ago. They were white, fair-haired like you. Some believe that Aryans are superior and I strongly believe in it. How about you?”
“I absolutely believe in it too” He seriously answered.
“They could manage to rule the whole world nearly 1000 years.” I continued, “Establishing such a great Empire isn’t an easy job. But a bunch of lizard eaters ruined all that glory.”
“Unfortunately” He responded sadly.
I told myself that this man is a patriotism rather than a religious person. Anyway we discussed some about race and the future of the world. I can’t remember that how did our discussion margin toward Yemen crisis.
“Do you know why Saudi Arabia encroached on Yemen’s boarders?” He asked.
“Because of Houthis.” I answered, “The emergence of a Shiite government in Yemen will strengthen the resistance axis in the region. Obviously Saudi Arabia can’t tolerate this condition.”
“You are wrong.” Said the taxi driver, “Let me clarify something to you. At this moment who many of us don’t care of the Imam of Time, some commanders in the Pentagon are planning to martyr him.”
“What a rot! Who said such nonsense words?” Interrupted his speech I uttered.
“Nonsense?” He laughed and said, “Hopefully you know that two Apostles of Imam are from Yemen and Saudi Arabia is afraid of them. That’s the reason of the invasion.”
Became dumb after hearing such weird elucidation! Couldn’t believe that such a purebred man has got these poisoning ideas.
Paid the fare and left the taxi.
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