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    Hello!!
    If I have to do a paragraph that end's with "we were all relieved to hear that aunt Beatrice had ecided to leave" how should I start to end like this?
    You can help me?I need a paragraph.
    Thank you!

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    What do you need this paragraph for?
    “Every miserable fool who has nothing at all of which he can be proud, adopts as a last resource pride in the nation to which he belongs; he is ready and happy to defend all its faults and follies tooth and nail, thus reimbursing himself for his own inferiority.”

    — Arthur Schopenhauer

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    #3

    Re: paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by Sandu Maria Diana View Post
    Hello! ​(One exclamation mark is enough.)
    If I have to do write a paragraph that end's ends with "We were all relieved to hear that aunt Beatrice had decided to leave", how should I start in order to end it like this?
    Can you can help me? (Space required here) I need a paragraph.
    Thank you! Unnecessary. Thank us after we have been helpful.
    Please see my corrections above, marked in red.

    As bhaisahab said, why do you have to write this paragraph?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: paragraph

    My Aunt Beatrice is a stickler. She thinks it's important to do your own work. But most of us think it's fine to ask others to do our work for us. The whole time she was with us, we had to do our OWN homework. Imagine how annoying that is! We were all relieved to hear...
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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