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    amend my own sentences

    1. According to him I am a talent person
    2. According to him I can learn English quickly.
    3. According to dog strangers are enemies.
    4. Because of low price I bought it
    5. Because of he said I opened it
    6. Because of his absences behaviour he lost his job
    7. In consequence of added sugar it was tasty
    8. In consequence of his affection she accept everything
    9. In consequence of his misbehaviour he lost all
    10. In addition to his cell he has a laptop
    11. In addition to his house he has a factory
    12. In accordance with her acceptance he did all
    13. In accordance with his angry she left him
    14. Instead of ravi, raju went there
    15. Instead of dvd player he has blue ray player
    16. In spite of difficulty to learn English he learnt successfully.
    17. In spite of work hardly he got good salary
    Please correct my questions if I have written them wrong
    best regards,
    Venkat :)

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    #2

    Re: amend my own sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by vengatvj View Post
    1. According to him I am a talented person.
    2. According to him I can learn English quickly.
    3. According to the dog, strangers are enemies.
    4. Because of the low price, I bought it.

    6. Because of his absences behaviour he lost his job. Delete "behaviour".


    9. In consequence of his misbehaviour he lost everything.
    10. In addition to his cell he has a laptop.
    11. In addition to his house he has a factory.


    14. Instead of ravi, raju went there.
    15. Instead of a dvd player he has a blue ray player.
    The others are beyond correction in their present form. Perhaps you could rewrite them.
    "Invading armies have no rights." Noam Chomsky

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