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    Please find attached my insurance claim

    Please correct my sentences.

    Please find attached my insurance claim which I have forwarded to our insurance company.
    Thank you for your usual support and follow-up to get the payment at the earliest.

    The following items were removed from the stock as they were found to be damaged upon stock taking.

    No joinery cost was mentioned as they haven't request any joinery work

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    Re: Please find attached my insurance claim

    Quote Originally Posted by JRD View Post
    Please correct my sentences.

    Please find attached my insurance claim which I have forwarded to our insurance company.
    Thank you for your usual support and follow-up to get the payment at the earliest.

    The following items were removed from the stock as they were found to be damaged upon inspection.

    No joinery cost was mentioned, as they haven't requested any joinery work
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    Re: Please find attached my insurance claim

    Tarheel has corrected the grammar, but I'm concerned about the usage.

    Please find attached my insurance claim which I have forwarded to our insurance company.

    1. Redundant to use insurance twice in the same sentence.

    2. Are you sure that one party to an insurance policy is filing a claim and another party to the same policy is not part of that filing? I guess it's possible, but it seems much more likely to be: ~Please find attached a copy of the claim which I have sent to our insurance company.

    3.We forward things that we have received, not things that we originate.

    4. Your second sentence is not good, but it's hard to suggest the best alternative without details of the relationship between the writer and the reader.

    5. Full stop at the end of your last sentence.
    Last edited by J&K Tutoring; 18-Nov-2015 at 15:35.

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