Untaught88
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Hi,
Can you please point out my mistakes in the following paragraphs, please?
"XXX was a great man. The whole world bears testimony of his greatness. He was the greatest Muslim poet of this century. His poetry gives the message of hope and success. His life was very simple. He considered lie and backbiting a great sin. He never sold his opinion at any cost. Though he needed solitude for creative work, yet he was ready to meet all kinds of people all the time who invaded/interfered his privacy at odd/inappropriate hours."
Can you please point out my mistakes in the following paragraphs, please?
"XXX was a great man. The whole world bears testimony of his greatness. He was the greatest Muslim poet of this century. His poetry gives the message of hope and success. His life was very simple. He considered lie and backbiting a great sin. He never sold his opinion at any cost. Though he needed solitude for creative work, yet he was ready to meet all kinds of people all the time who invaded/interfered his privacy at odd/inappropriate hours."