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    As rambunctious as this man

    As rambunctious as this man was, he was still the envy of everyone. Most of us struggle through our petty lives, swearing and cussing at everything and everyone we get our hands on. He just chose not to do that, and instead he lived a life that even the Gods would have been envious of!

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    Re: As rambunctious as this man

    You have come up with some strange sentences. The word "gods" is rarely capitalized in its plural form.

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    Re: As rambunctious as this man

    You also have a response to your question here: http://forum.thefreedictionary.com/p...-this-man.aspx

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    Re: As rambunctious as this man

    I can't see what just adds to the third sentence.

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    Re: As rambunctious as this man

    As rambunctious as this man was, he was still admired by everyone. Some of us struggle through our petty lives, swearing and cussing at everything we get our hands on. He chose not to do that, and instead he lived a life that would have been the envy of the Gods!

    When, out of the blue and after many years of absence, he appeared at our doorstep, we greeted him with boundless affection. Flabbergasted by the hugs and kisses rained upon him, he was speechless and spellbound. Oh! how we missed this "Goliath of Wits", without whom our lives would have been stale and lifeless!

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    Re: As rambunctious as this man

    It seems that I responded to this previously. Let's look at one sentence at a time.

    Quote Originally Posted by kuben123 View Post
    As rambunctious as this man was, he was still admired by everyone.
    I do not know why you say he was rambunctious, and I do not have a clue as to why he was admired by everyone. Perhaps:

    He was the smartest man in any room he was in. He was admired by everyone.

    (You seemed to use the word "rambunctious" only because you wanted to use that word in a sentence.)

    Quote Originally Posted by kuben123 View Post
    Some of us struggle through our petty lives, swearing and cussing at everything we get our hands on.
    That sentence makes no sense.

    Quote Originally Posted by kuben123 View Post
    He chose not to do that, and instead he lived a life that would have been the envy of the gods.
    How do you choose not to do something that nobody does in the first place?

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