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    led to the partition of Indochina

    The agreement reached in Geneva in 1954, which the US objected to signing, led to the partition of Indochina and following escalation of the coflict in the region.

    Does the sentence above (especially the bald part) make sense? How can I imrpove it?
    Please, correct all my mistakes. I should know English perfectly and if you show me my mistakes I will achieve my dream a little bit faster. A lot of thanks.

    Not a teacher nor a native speaker.

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    Re: led to the partition of Indochina

    The bald part? Are these sentences making you tear your hair out, Boris?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: led to the partition of Indochina

    I'd put 'the' before 'following.

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    Re: led to the partition of Indochina

    Boris, I don't think that a nation can object to it signing an agreement. A nation can object to other nations signing an agreement. The objecting nation could refuse to sign the agreement.

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    #5

    Re: led to the partition of Indochina

    Boris, is this your own writing? If not, please cite the source and author.

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    #6

    Re: led to the partition of Indochina

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
    Boris, is this your own writing? If not, please cite the source and author.
    Yes. All (the?) topics I started yesterday contained my own sentences. Don't worry about it.
    Last edited by Boris Tatarenko; 29-Nov-2015 at 10:21.
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    #7

    Re: led to the partition of Indochina

    Quote Originally Posted by Boris Tatarenko View Post
    coflict
    conflict
    Quote Originally Posted by Boris Tatarenko View Post
    imrpove
    improve

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