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    How can I rewrite this email?

    The email is as follows:

    I cannot find the file for uploading the written report via "Turnitin", may I know if there is an error in the system or the submission platform has not been opened up yet? Thank you.

    How can I rewrite it in a better way? Thank you.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 29-Nov-2015 at 13:41. Reason: Enlarged font to make it readable

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    Re: How can I rewrite this email?

    Quote Originally Posted by yslamac View Post
    The email is as follows:

    I cannot find the file for uploading the written report via "Turnitin". may I know Please tell me if there is an error in the system or the submission platform has not been opened up yet. Thank you.

    How can I rewrite it in a better way? Thank you.
    See my amendments above. I don't understand the terminology in the first part so I've left it as it is.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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