Lumia625
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Hello,
I was reading an article in Wikipedia and found that some parts of it seem ungrammatical. I have corrected those parts but I'm not sure about my corrections. would you please express your opinions toward the original text and my corrections?
Thank you in advance,
I was reading an article in Wikipedia and found that some parts of it seem ungrammatical. I have corrected those parts but I'm not sure about my corrections. would you please express your opinions toward the original text and my corrections?
He then played roles of ACP Arvind Mathur who [STRIKE]battles[/STRIKE] battles against his inner demons in Shaitan, [STRIKE]the tinnitus affected DJ from Soundtrack[/STRIKE] the DJ affected by tinnitus in Soundtrack and also played Vivaan Agasthi in the 2013 thriller, Table No. 21.
Thank you in advance,