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    What is love?

    Hi,

    Can you please point out my mistakes in the following paragraph?

    ''What is love? It makes some people laugh and some people weep. You will find a lot of people claiming to love someone, but most of them don't even know the definition of love. It is easy to say that I'll bring the moon and stars from the sky for you. Love is not a game. Man can always expect fidelity from God alone. We should love our God and His prophet first and then our parents.''

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    Re: What is love?

    Untaught, please post paragraphs for correction in this forum rather than Ask a Teacher.
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 02-Dec-2015 at 23:13.

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    Re: What is love?

    I don't fully understand that word too.
    Last edited by Osbri; 06-Dec-2015 at 02:00.
    Not a teacher.

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