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    Thanks for the reivsed offer.

    Thanks for the revised offer. As discussed the other day, approx. 25% of my CTC is in the form of retention pay apart from PLR and quarterly pay. As a result my in hand salary is much lesser than my present in hand salary.

    Keeping above in mind, I request you to consider the below:

    • Structure the CTC in such a way that my in hand salary is Rs. 70,000
    • Total CTC excluding mobile and data card is Rs. 1,00,000.


    Please take the above in consideration, if possible and let me know if you agree to my above expectations.

    Are these sentences OK? Is there any better way to convey the above?
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 11-Dec-2015 at 21:42. Reason: Removed unnecessary italics

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    #2

    Re: Thanks for the reivsed offer.

    I don't understand the first paragraph. You seem to be saying that your salary is less than your salary.


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    #3

    Re: Thanks for the reivsed offer.

    Perhaps:

    Keeping the aforementioned in mind, I ask you to consider the following:

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    Re: Thanks for the reivsed offer.

    Say:

    Structure the CTC in such a way that my salary is Rs 70,000.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 11-Dec-2015 at 21:43. Reason: Fixed typo

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    #5

    Re: Thanks for the reivsed offer.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Perhaps:

    Keeping the aforementioned in mind, I ask you to consider the following:
    It's blank after following.

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    #6

    Re: Thanks for the reivsed offer.

    Post #4?

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    #7

    Re: Thanks for the reivsed offer.

    Quote Originally Posted by suniljain View Post
    apart from PLR and quarterly pay.
    I don't understand that part.

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