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    When Peter's wife

    Would you please correct my mistakes in the following sentence. I am not sure if it sounds natural.

    When Peter's wife woke him by clattering of the pots and pans in the kitchen, he jumped up like a startled bear from hibernation and showered her with insults and curses.

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    Re: When Peter's wife

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    When Peter's wife woke him by with the clattering of the pots and pans in the kitchen, he jumped up like a startled bear from startled out of hibernation and showered her with insults and curses.
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