Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
Would you please correct my mistakes in the following sentences. I am not sure if my punctuation is correct.
1. Anna peered through the window at the dark street where a stranger in a fedora walked passed.
2. It was impossible to imagine what Peter had gone through, but his haggard face and numerous wrinkles witnessed about his difficult time.
3. Sometimes, old Bob would sit in his garden, imagining he was still a young boy, a virgin, and a prospective man full of dreams, who had a whole life in front of him.
1. Anna peered through the window at the dark street where a stranger in a fedora walked passed.
2. It was impossible to imagine what Peter had gone through, but his haggard face and numerous wrinkles witnessed about his difficult time.
3. Sometimes, old Bob would sit in his garden, imagining he was still a young boy, a virgin, and a prospective man full of dreams, who had a whole life in front of him.