Untaught88
Senior Member
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- Jan 8, 2015
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- Pakistan
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Hi,
Can you please point out my mistakes?
''Man makes his own fate. He should work hard with devotion so that he may achieve success in his life. Hard work is the greatest reality/fact of this world which cannot be belied. If we look at the past , we will realise that all the great men worked hard and made their fate. Some people do not work and blame their fate when they fail. God helps those who help themselves.''
Can you please point out my mistakes?
''Man makes his own fate. He should work hard with devotion so that he may achieve success in his life. Hard work is the greatest reality/fact of this world which cannot be belied. If we look at the past , we will realise that all the great men worked hard and made their fate. Some people do not work and blame their fate when they fail. God helps those who help themselves.''