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    #1

    Question Is my writing correct?

    DO following paragraphs have mistakes or any incorrect sentace?
    Modifying / suggestions also is welcome.

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    - Are you a hollywood lover?
    - Can you share with us what you think about your favourite celebrity or movie?
    - Can you write or rewrite a hollywood news?
    - Can you write or rewrite a hollywood gossip?
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    - Do you have fifteen minutes to half an hour free time in a month?

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    What you have to do?
    - Write / rewrite anything about hollywood and your writing should have 250 words minimum.
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    - Your submission should be grammar and spelling error free.
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    #2

    Re: Is my writing correct?

    Say:

    Do the following paragraphs have any errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc.?

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    #3

    Re: Is my writing correct?

    Perhaps:

    I welcome constructive criticism. Please make suggestions and offer corrections.

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    Re: Is my writing correct?

    Perhaps:

    Win movie tickets for yourself and a friend.

    Do you have to enter anew every month?

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