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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    Question Is my writing correct?

    DO following paragraphs have mistakes or any incorrect sentace?
    Modifying / suggestions also is welcome.

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    Win free movie tickets every month.

    - Are you a hollywood lover?
    - Can you share with us what you think about your favourite celebrity or movie?
    - Can you write or rewrite a hollywood news?
    - Can you write or rewrite a hollywood gossip?
    - Can you write or rewrite a hollywood movie review?
    - Do you have fifteen minutes to half an hour free time in a month?

    If your answer is 'YES' for at least two of the questions above then you can win a free movie ticket every month.

    WEBSITE NAME introduces a new campaign from 1st of Jan 2016.
    By entering the campaign you can win a free movie ticket monthly.

    What you have to do?
    - Write / rewrite anything about hollywood and your writing should have 250 words minimum.
    - Submit it with an image that suits with your news/gossip/review.
    - Sit back and wait for the winner announcement.

    Conditions:
    - You can be from anywhere of the world.
    - Your submission should be grammar and spelling error free.
    - Your submission should be written by your own / rewritten from any source.
    - Copy & paste strictly prohibited.
    - Before you submit yours please check our website. If you find the same article / news do not submit or modify and make yours better than published one.
    - All the submission should be sent via our site.
    - One person can submit maximum 3 submissions per month.

    How will we select the competitors?
    - A good, grammar & spelling error free submissions will be selected manually.
    - All those who manually selected will be entered to a lucky draw.
    - The winner will be announced in our website by every 1st of Month.
    - The winner will get alert to his/her mobile number and email.
    - Current month winner will be selected by 1st of the next month. Eg: If you submit 3rd of Jan or or even 21st of Jan your submission lucky draw will be entered by 1st of February.

  2. Tarheel's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: Is my writing correct?

    Say:

    Do the following paragraphs have any errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc.?

  3. Tarheel's Avatar
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    #3

    Re: Is my writing correct?

    Perhaps:

    I welcome constructive criticism. Please make suggestions and offer corrections.

  4. Tarheel's Avatar
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    #4

    Re: Is my writing correct?

    Perhaps:

    Win movie tickets for yourself and a friend.

    Do you have to enter anew every month?

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