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DO following paragraphs have mistakes or any incorrect sentace?
Modifying / suggestions also is welcome.

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Win free movie tickets every month.

- Are you a hollywood lover?
- Can you share with us what you think about your favourite celebrity or movie?
- Can you write or rewrite a hollywood news?
- Can you write or rewrite a hollywood gossip?
- Can you write or rewrite a hollywood movie review?
- Do you have fifteen minutes to half an hour free time in a month?

If your answer is 'YES' for at least two of the questions above then you can win a free movie ticket every month.

WEBSITE NAME introduces a new campaign from 1st of Jan 2016.
By entering the campaign you can win a free movie ticket monthly.

What you have to do?
- Write / rewrite anything about hollywood and your writing should have 250 words minimum.
- Submit it with an image that suits with your news/gossip/review.
- Sit back and wait for the winner announcement.

Conditions:
- You can be from anywhere of the world.
- Your submission should be grammar and spelling error free.
- Your submission should be written by your own / rewritten from any source.
- Copy & paste strictly prohibited.
- Before you submit yours please check our website. If you find the same article / news do not submit or modify and make yours better than published one.
- All the submission should be sent via our site.
- One person can submit maximum 3 submissions per month.

How will we select the competitors?
- A good, grammar & spelling error free submissions will be selected manually.
- All those who manually selected will be entered to a lucky draw.
- The winner will be announced in our website by every 1st of Month.
- The winner will get alert to his/her mobile number and email.
- Current month winner will be selected by 1st of the next month. Eg: If you submit 3rd of Jan or or even 21st of Jan your submission lucky draw will be entered by 1st of February.
 

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Say:

Do the following paragraphs have any errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc.?
 

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Perhaps:

I welcome constructive criticism. Please make suggestions and offer corrections.
 

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Perhaps:

Win movie tickets for yourself and a friend.

Do you have to enter anew every month?
 
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