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    #11

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

    Thanks emsr2d2, I never submit it to any teacher. I am studying English in my room alone and trying to improve my writing for Tofel and GRE exams. So I need you to revise my essay.

    Thanks Tarheel, I have not opted any word, because I am not confident which word is right or wrong. I want you to revise each part or word that you think that they are wrong.

    Thank you all.

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    #12

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

    If you have no enough time to discuss or explain the wrong parts, I will appreciate if you determine errors with red color font and I myself spend more time understand them. Bless you.

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    #13

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

    It's TOEFL, but I'm not sure what the first two letters stand for.

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    I haven't submitted my essay to a teacher, nor do I have any plans to do so.

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    Please pay close attention to my suggestions. I have plenty of experience doing this sort of thing.

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    #14

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

    I don't know what it means to opt a word. That's why I asked the question.

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    #15

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

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    I would appreciate it if you would point out my errors using red. I will learn from that.

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    I have to go to bed now, so it will be several hours before I get back on the forum. That is, it will be if I fall asleep and don't wake up too soon.

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    #16

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

    I hope you don't absolutely have to see red to learn.

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    #17

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

    I have not opted any word of the essay. I want you to review and revise the essay or point out errors using red.

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    #18

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    I still don't know what you mean by "opted". Deleted?

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    #19

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

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    I have written an essay, and I need to evaluate it.

    (More later.)

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    #20

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

    I do not mean anything from "opted". I only want somebody help me and review the mentioned essay. I will appreciate if anybody do that. Thanks.

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