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    #21

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

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    I have written an essay, and I need to have it evaluated.

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    #22

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    Some people prefer to attend live performances, while others prefer to stay home and watch those same events on TV.

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    #23

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    As for me, I don't want to have to deal with traffic. I don't want to pay for parking. I don't want to pay for tickets. And I don't want to pay the high prices they change for snacks. I'd rather stay at home and watch TV with my friends. And make my own snacks.

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    #24

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

    Is there any grammatically error in my essay? If yes, please determine them. Thanks.

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    #25

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    Are there any grammatical errors in my essay? If there are, please point them out.

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    #26

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

    What I have been doing is I have been rewriting your sentences so that they are phrased in idiomatic English.

    I have also been making some suggestions for improvements.

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    #27

    Re: need to evaluate my essay

    Do not use phrases like "civil traffic" or "civil problems" that are not English phrases.

    For "harsh sound" say "noise".

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    #28

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    I don't want to have to put up with traffic noise. I get enough of that on the way to work and back.

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