Need help from Native Speaker in writing

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Delailah

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Russian Federation
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Good afternoon everyone!Can you kindly help me with these sentences (I really don't know if native speakers do write this way about the priority in life which is education for me):

For some people money is the main priority in life meanwhile I put my education on the top of the list.I am ready to spend my money on studying to get an interesting and well-paid job later.So,for me,it is necessary to contribute in studying now to achive success in the future.A little help is very important too.That's when family support matters!Family or friends can help in collecting the information required or simply in preparing meals.When there is no time a help like this is priceless.



P.S.:Onces in bold are sentences that I am totally unsure about
Would be gratefull for any comments on this)
 

emsr2d2

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Welcome to the forum. :hi:

When are you going to submit this piece of writing/essay to your teacher/tutor?
 
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