If this professional enough to email my uni?

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Dear Sir or Madam,
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[/FONT]This is to request more information about your Law course at _________ University. I am extremely interested in this course and I am anxious to apply for it in your renowned university for admission in the next week or 2.
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[/FONT]I am currently studying in year 13 so first, I would like to inquire your views on A level retakes.
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[/FONT]Second, I would greatly appreciate some information about your policies on taking a gap year and, if I would be accepted a year later.
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[/FONT]Thank you in advance for your attention to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.
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[/FONT]Yours sincerely, ______

 

[Rover_KE]

Welcome to the forum.

If you had read through your letter, you'd have noticed that some words have been run together. This sometimes happens in the copy and paste process.

Use the Edit Post feature to insert spaces where necessary.