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    Smiling

    Hello everybody, I'd like to ask you if you can tell me if there is any mistake in these sentences: "I'm learning how to smile at everything life put and puts me through. There can be hard times, but even the harshest one will turn out to be a chance to live wholly. I'll always try to smile because life's too short not to enjoy it and also because smiling always bestows a great sense of freedom and relief."
    I would like to post it as a description under a photo on Instagram haha but I'm not sure if it's 100% correct! Thank yooouu!!

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    Re: Smiling

    Quote Originally Posted by polimilan View Post
    Hello everybody. I'd like to ask you if you can tell me if there is are any mistakes in these sentences.

    "I'm learning how to smile at everything life put and puts me through. There can might be hard times (no comma here) but even the harshest one will turn out to be a chance to live wholly completely. I'll always try to smile because life's too short not to enjoy it and also because smiling always bestows a great sense of freedom and relief."

    I would like to post it as a description under a photo on Instagram haha but I'm not sure if it's 100% correct! Thank yooouu you! !!
    See my changes above, marked in red.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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