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    I got a revised

    I got a revised offer from a company but I want them to increase my salary by 1.5 million pm. Now I want to write a humble email of my intension to increase the salary by 2.5mn per annum so that I would be in comfortable position. (I want to join that co.)

    Please correct the below draft reply:

    I am interest in joining this group but given the present CTC structure; my in hand salary is much less than my present take away salary per month. I request you to kindly fill this bridge and increase my in hand salary by 1.5 lac per annum.

    (Please draft it correctly; if not correct)

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    Re: I got a revised

    I am interest in joining this group but given the present CTC structure; my in hand salary is much less than my present take away salary per month. I request you to kindly fill this bridge and increase my in hand salary by 1.5 lac per annum.
    I am interested in joining your company. (what do you mean by "given the present CTC structure"?)
    The salary that I have been offered is much less than my present salary. As such, I would like to request that the offered salary be increased by 1.5 lac per annum, to match my present salary.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 08-Jan-2016 at 12:42. Reason: Added quote box to separate the quote from tedmc's response
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: I got a revised

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    I am interest in joining this group but given the present CTC structure; my in hand salary is much less than my present take away salary per month. I request you to kindly fill this bridge and increase my in hand salary by 1.5 lac per annum.

    I am interested in joining your company. (what do you mean by "given the present CTC structure"?)
    The salary that I have been offered is much less than my present salary. As such, I would like to request that the offered salary be increased by 1.5 lac per annum, to match my present salary.
    Present CTC structure means the salary theyare offering me.

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    Re: I got a revised

    What does CTC stand for?
    Why not name the exact salary figure you want instead of stating the figure to top up?
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