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    Re: HELP! Personal statement

    hi guys
    I am a new member
    I hope one can find my question and help me as I need help urgently
    the deadline of the university is near to happen
    this is my SOP , I appreciate that if you can edit it
    Last edited by sariii; 12-Jan-2016 at 20:55. Reason: It is sOP and not to be shared

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    Re: HELP! Personal statement

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
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    Thank you so much for taking the time correcting this full of mistakes SOP.
    one friend of mine told me about the usefulness of this site.
    and I should acknowledge that your correction was very helpful. I am happy with that.

    I forgot to upload the file via attachment button below this page, and as you may know, if the sop can be found in the net it can be considered plagiarism.
    would you please delete this tread? it can heart my admission process

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    Re: HELP! Personal statement

    Say:

    Thank you for taking the time to corrrect this error-filled SOP.

    (Don't put "SOP" in lower case. It's an entirely different word then.)

    There's a reason we ask you not to put personal information in your posts. That way, nobody knows who you are.

    Teechar is good, but even he can't catch. everything. However, that might be a good thing. If people see some minor errors they might be more likely to think you did it yourself.

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    Re: HELP! Personal statement

    Say:

    My primary research objectives and interests are...

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    #5

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    I couldn't find any way to send a private message to Teechar to remove the thread.
    would you please tell him or her to delete that?

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    Re: HELP! Personal statement

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Say:

    My primary research objectives and interests are...
    How we can delete the SOP ? would you please tell the Teechar to remove that by editing the thread

    Thank you my friend :)

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    Re: HELP! Personal statement

    Only moderators can do things like delete posts or threads.

    If you want to send teechar a PM you'll have to remember that it's all lower case: teechar. But you might want to read the first paragraph again.

    Two things. 1. Why would anybody want to work that hard just to have the thread deleted? 2. If anybody wants to "steal" something they will want the improved version, so they wouldn't be stealing anything from you in the first place, would they?

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    Re: HELP! Personal statement

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Only moderators can do things like delete posts or threads.

    If you want to send teechar a PM you'll have to remember that it's all lower case: teechar. But you might want to read the first paragraph again.

    Two things. 1. Why would anybody want to work that hard just to have the thread deleted? 2. If anybody wants to "steal" something they will want the improved version, so they wouldn't be stealing anything from you in the first place, would they?
    Actually universities check the SOP for the originality, maybe they check the materials which are filled the net, so I am insisting to remove that.

    how I can send a message to teechar? he can simply edit his post by removing my SOP ( it was really helpful for me)

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    Re: HELP! Personal statement

    Send a message to Tdol or one of the moderators.

    I'm beginning to think that we should stop doing this altogether.

    This is a public forum. The people who do the work are volunteers.

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    By "this" I meant free proofreading service.

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