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    "Did you see..."

    Hi everyone. Here's my question.

    I wanted to know which sounds right to all of you.

    A) "Did you see his eyes looking into yours?"

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    B) "Did you feel his eyes looking into yours?"
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    #2

    Re: "Did you see..."

    Neither seems natural to me. But the first one is, I think, better.

    More natural would be:

    Did you see them looking into each other's eyes?

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    Re: "Did you see..."

    Oh, I see. I messed up because I didn't use the present participle. Thank you so much for that feedback.

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    Re: "Did you see..."

    I'm still a bit confused on whether or not 'see' or 'feel' is more appropriate to the sentence. Could anyone give me more feedback in reference to that?

    I always hear "I felt his eyes on me" and "I felt someone's stare," but I'd like to know if it functions in that sentence.

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    Re: "Did you see..."

    The problem is that if someone is looking into your eyes, you are inevitably also looking into theirs unless you have a visual impairment. It would be weird to use "feel" when you must obviously also see the other person.
    I am not a teacher.

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