Student or Learner
Dear sir or madam,
This is to request more information about your civil engineering program at University of Toronto. I am extremely interested in this program and I am anxious to apply for it in your renowned university for the next admission.
I have 18 years old, I am currently studying in a professional technical institution in Colombia, but these studies are not enough to get a good job and pay an undergraduate program, so I would inquire about the Admission scholarships at the university of Toronto and if I could apply some of these scholarships
Thank you in advance for your attention to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.
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