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    #1

    is it correctly?

    Dear sir or madam,

    This is to request more information about your civil engineering program at University of Toronto. I am extremely interested in this program and I am anxious to apply for it in your renowned university for the next admission.

    I have 18 years old, I am currently studying in a professional technical institution in Colombia, but these studies are not enough to get a good job and pay an undergraduate program, so I would inquire about the Admission scholarships at the university of Toronto
    and if I could apply some of these scholarships


    Thank you in advance for your attention to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.



    Sincerely,

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    Re: is it correctly?

    Quote Originally Posted by johnmorales View Post
    Dear Sir or Madam,

    This is to request more information about your civil engineering program at the University of Toronto. I am extremely very interested in this program, and I am anxious eager to apply for it in your renowned university for the next admission.

    I have am 18 years old, and I am currently studying in a professional technical institution in Colombia. , but these studies are not enough to get a good job and pay an undergraduate program, so I would I also wish to inquire about the admission scholarships at the University of Toronto
    and if I could apply some of and how to go about applying for these scholarships.


    Thank you in advance for your kind help, and I hope to hear from you soon. attention to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.


    Yours faithfully,
    Sincerely,
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    Talking Re: is it correctly?

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
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    Thank you,

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    #4

    Re: is it correctly?

    You're welcome. Note that in future, you don't need to write a post to say thank you. You can just click the Thank/Like button to thank someone for their help.

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    Re: is it correctly?

    I would start with "I am writing to request more information ...", not "This is to ...". Alternatively, you could open with "Please could you send me more information ...".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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