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  1. no1best

    please help me!

    i write a short passage,please give some suggestions to me !thank you!
    good evening,everyone!
    it's my great honour to be here!
    i have a dream that everyday is a sunny day.
    i have a dream that everywhere is peaceful.
    i have a dream that everybody leads a happy life.
    i have a dream tonight.
    i really appreciate all you supports and wish the best luck to everyone of you.
    i know life is not a bad of rose,but just do it.
    support me ,thank you!

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    Re: please help me!

    it's my great honour to be here! - It's a great honour for me to be here
    I would use will- everywhere will be peaceful...
    all you supports- all your support
    bad of rose- bed of roses


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