he realized that he “was deceived/had been deceived” by his fund manager.

Status
Not open for further replies.

z7655431

Member
Joined
Jan 12, 2016
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
Taiwan
Current Location
Taiwan
The investor had lost millions of dollars before he realized that he “had been deceived” by his fund manager.
The investor had lost millions of dollars before he realized that he “was deceived” by his fund manager.
In the two sentences, which verb tense is used more properly? Which is correct?
 

z7655431

Member
Joined
Jan 12, 2016
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
Taiwan
Current Location
Taiwan
'... had been deceived' is correct.
The investor had lost millions of dollars before he realized that he “was deceived” by his fund manager.
---Is this sentence incorrect?
 

Tdol

No Longer With Us (RIP)
Staff member
Joined
Nov 13, 2002
Native Language
British English
Home Country
UK
Current Location
Japan
The deception came before the realisation, so the past perfect is the natural choice.
 

MikeNewYork

VIP Member
Joined
Nov 13, 2002
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
American English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
I would accept the simple past at the the end because of the word "before". That word established the timing of the events.
 

MikeNewYork

VIP Member
Joined
Nov 13, 2002
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
American English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
I am aware of that. There was a deception, then a realization.
 

Matthew Wai

VIP Member
Joined
Nov 29, 2013
Member Type
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
China
Current Location
China
The context has made it clear that the deception must have happened before the realization, so the past perfect is optional.

Is that correct?
 

bhaisahab

Moderator
Staff member
Joined
Apr 12, 2008
Member Type
Retired English Teacher
Native Language
British English
Home Country
England
Current Location
Ireland
I think it's essential, not optional.
 

MikeNewYork

VIP Member
Joined
Nov 13, 2002
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
American English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
I consider it optional, Matthew.
 

Matthew Wai

VIP Member
Joined
Nov 29, 2013
Member Type
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
China
Current Location
China
Yet another difference between AmE and BrE.
 

bhaisahab

Moderator
Staff member
Joined
Apr 12, 2008
Member Type
Retired English Teacher
Native Language
British English
Home Country
England
Current Location
Ireland
Possibly, Matthew. We need the opinions of more people, British and American, to be sure.
 

Raymott

VIP Member
Joined
Jun 29, 2008
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
English
Home Country
Australia
Current Location
Australia
Yet another difference between AmE and BrE.
Really? What I see is another difference between Mike and everyone else.
In any case, one thing happening before another is not a signal for necessarily using the past perfect.
One thing happening before another with an added "before" is not necessarily a sign that the simple past is adequate.
There are other contextual determinants. In this case, I'd consider "had been deceived" to be a superior answer.
 

Tdol

No Longer With Us (RIP)
Staff member
Joined
Nov 13, 2002
Native Language
British English
Home Country
UK
Current Location
Japan
If you wanted to use the past, was being deceived would work better for me.
 

Barb_D

Moderator
Staff member
Joined
Mar 12, 2007
Member Type
Other
Native Language
American English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
This American agrees with the BrE and AusE posters and disagrees that the past perfect is options in this context.
 

MikeNewYork

VIP Member
Joined
Nov 13, 2002
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
American English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
Really? What I see is another difference between Mike and everyone else.
In any case, one thing happening before another is not a signal for necessarily using the past perfect.
One thing happening before another with an added "before" is not necessarily a sign that the simple past is adequate.
There are other contextual determinants. In this case, I'd consider "had been deceived" to be a superior answer.

But you have no evidence that the simple past is wrong.
 

MikeNewYork

VIP Member
Joined
Nov 13, 2002
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
American English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
Because it is not.
 

Matthew Wai

VIP Member
Joined
Nov 29, 2013
Member Type
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
China
Current Location
China
The investor had lost millions of dollars before he realized that he “was deceived” by his fund manager.
Would any native speakers think that 'was deceived' did not happen before 'realized' above?
 

Matthew Wai

VIP Member
Joined
Nov 29, 2013
Member Type
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
China
Current Location
China
The past perfect is necessary for the sentence to be natural but unnecessary for the meaning to be clear.

Any objection?
 

Tdol

No Longer With Us (RIP)
Staff member
Joined
Nov 13, 2002
Native Language
British English
Home Country
UK
Current Location
Japan
Sounds OK to me.
 

Raymott

VIP Member
Joined
Jun 29, 2008
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
English
Home Country
Australia
Current Location
Australia
But you have no evidence that the simple past is wrong.
Put into reported speech, back shifted:
1. "He realized 'I am deceived' " -> "He realized he was deceived."
2. "He realized "I have been deceived' " -> "He realized he had been deceived."

I think the most likely meaning is 2.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top