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Can anyone check my essay? Can I start a sentence with "While"?
While Tamizh, along with his family, leads a peaceful life, due to a certain turn of events Tamizh's father faces a grave situation, which in turn disrupts Tamizh's daily life.
Thamizh is a young guy who is born in a middle-class family and stays with his parents. When he goes to the temple one day, he sees Hema and romance blossoms. However, there’s a twist in his love story and he ends up getting married to Yamuna, a girl chosen by his parents. And then one day an unexpected incident happen to Thamizh’s fathers. How does it impact Tamizh’s routine life and how he overcomes from this situation?
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