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    Beads Debate

    Dear Ama,
    Seasons greetings to you I hope you're doing well. This email is to update you on S Beads advertisement that we have now completed the 30minutes slot and am ready to start. Based on our previous conversation ,I will now be available for this week to take part in any talk show you think will interest me.also I will be grateful if you can recommend the time and day for the advertisement slot.i will prefer to have slot in the program that is more available in Africa.i believe Mensah have bee speaking with you regarding these as well.i will be very grateful with all the assistant I can get from you regarding this project in order to make a successful and any discount you can give me as am planning to role the advert for months. I am also waiting to receive your first order with me

    Best regards
    serwaa

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    Re: Beads Debate

    Welcome to the forum.

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    Re: Beads Debate

    You need to say "assistance" (or "help") instead of "assistant".

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    Re: Beads Debate

    Quote Originally Posted by naaaku View Post
    Dear Ama,
    Season's greetings to you, and I hope you're doing well. This email is to update you on the S Beads advertisement. that We have now completed the 30-minute slot and am are ready to start. Based on our previous conversation, I will now be available for this week to take part in any talk show you think is suitable. will interest me. also I will I would also be grateful if you can recommend the time and day for the advertisement slot. i will I would prefer to have slot in the a program that is more available has a high viewership in Africa. I believe Mensah have bee has been speaking with you regarding these points as well. I will be very grateful with for all the assistant assistance I can get from you regarding this project, in order to and I hope we can make a successful start. and I would also appreciate any discount you can give me as am planning to role roll the advert for several months. I am also waiting to receive your first order with me.

    Best regards,

    Serwaa
    Note:
    - As it's almost February, "Season's greetings" may not be appropriate.
    - Should you have used "30-second slot" instead of "30-minute slot" as it's meant to be an ad?
    - I'm not sure how your last sentence fits with your letter.

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