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    Conclusion

    Please review my conclusion:

    In conclusion, I agree with those who support space research, because it has so many benefits as I already stated. Exploring the space may allow mankind to discover more and more in numerous fields and invent practical benefits on Earth.In conclusion, I agree with those who support space research, because it has so many benefits as I already stated. Exploring the space may allow mankind to discover more and more in numerous fields and invent practical benefits on Earth.

    Thank you.

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    Re: Conclusion

    It is not clear whether you have offered one conclusion or two. If it meant to be one, it is redundant at the end.

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    Re: Conclusion

    Quote Originally Posted by genteel View Post
    In conclusion, I agree with those who support space research, because it has so many benefits, as I have stated. Exploring the space may allow mankind to discover more and more in numerous fields and invent things of practical benefit on Earth.
    You can think of what you want to substitute for "things". You need something there.

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