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    Please check my CV

    Hello,I write the improved post, but I was wrote and send on the closed topic, so it was lost. Again.

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    PERSONAL INFORMATIONS
    Name ******* ******
    Address 162th ********* St Town 1111
    Email *******.*****@outlook.com
    Mobile Phone 11111111111111
    
    BRIEF INTRODUCTION
    
    
    I am almost finished with my studies at the University. The system in knowledge is probably the best thing I had ever met. I have been constantly improving my English, Excel, Math skills. Now I pay attention to those technical areas that have meaning for me and also I can create value with them.
    
    STUDIES
    
    2010 ***** ****** ****** University of ******, Budapest.
    General: Manufacturing process management, Theories of technology, Project management
    Economic: Logistics, Business Economics, System and cost evaluations, Management
    Professional: Evaluation of subjective data, Supplier systems,
    Quality tools and techniques, Management tools, Building and development of management systems, Modern techniques for making decisions
    
    2008 – 2010 Typographic publication editor Light Industrial Technical College, Town
    Important subjects: Preparation of manufacturing, Quality assurance, Internship. The professional exams approximately are 70%.
    
    2004 – 2008 High School Light Industrial High School, Debrecen
    Important subjects: English, Professional orientation to the technological region
    
    PROFESSIONAL OBSERVATIONS
    
    2015-2016 Company Name – Billing Intern process invoices, record, make reports
    2015 Company Name – Administration student work
    Organize, record and register Statements
    2014-2015 Company Name - Back Office department, Excel,
    Word and CRM database using
    2013-2015 Company Name - Cashier
    2009 Company Name - Typography publication editor
    6 week internship
    Preparation of typographic work. We have created a book. (From the raw text and picture to manufacture complete format)
    
    LANGUAGE
    
    English C1 (fluent, intonation)
    
    SKILLS
    
    
    10 finger writing, Linux, MS Office, Excel (pivot,vlookup,...,etc.) Visio, Project, Corel Draw, InDesign, HTML, SQL, VBA
    Okey. I am widely open to any suggestion that improve my grammar usage. I daily practice English to achieve excellence and a deep understanding of the language. I will be thankful, if somebody review my words and suggest any correction. I am glad for this opportunity.

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    Re: Please check my CV

    Quote Originally Posted by hutoczki.jozsef View Post
    PERSONAL INFORMATIONS
    Personal information:
    Name: ******* ******
    Address: 162th ********* St Town 1111
    Email: *******.*****@outlook.com
    Mobile: Phone 11111111111111

    BRIEF INTRODUCTION
    Brief introduction:
    I am almost finished with my studies at will graduate from the University of XYZ in June 2016 with a Bachelor of Information Technology. The system in knowledge is probably the best thing I had ever met. I have been constantly improving working hard to improve my English language skills, knowledge of MS Excel and math skills. Now I pay attention to those technical areas that have meaning for me and also I can create value with them.

    STUDIES
    Educational record:
    2010 ***** ****** ****** University of ******, Budapest.
    Quote Originally Posted by hutoczki.jozsef View Post
    General: Manufacturing process management, Theories of technology, Project management
    Economic: Logistics, Business Economics, System and cost evaluations, Management
    Professional: Evaluation of subjective data, Supplier systems,
    Quality tools and techniques, Management tools, Building and development of management systems, Modern techniques for making decisions
    What are you listing above?

    Quote Originally Posted by hutoczki.jozsef View Post
    2008–2010: Typographic Publication Editor Certificate/Diploma? Light Industrial Technical College, ??? Town

    Important Major subjects: Preparation of manufacturing, Quality Assurance, Internship. The professional exams approximately are 70%.

    2004 – 2008 High School Light Industrial High School, Debrecen
    Important subjects: English, Professional orientation to the technological region

    PROFESSIONAL OBSERVATIONS
    Work experience:
    2015-2016 Company Name – Billing Intern process invoices, record, make reports
    2015 Company Name – Part-time administration assistant. student work
    Organize, record and register Statements
    2014-2015 Company Name - Back-office assistant. department, Excel,
    Word and CRM database using
    2013-2015 Company Name - Cashier
    2009 Company Name - Typography publication editor
    6 week internship
    Preparation of typographic work. We have created a book - from the raw text and pictures to manufacture publishing the complete-format book.

    LANGUAGE
    Language skills:
    Romanian (native speaker)

    English C1 (intermediate level). (fluent, intonation)

    SKILLS

    Other skills:
    10 finger writing, Typing, Linux administration, MS Office, Excel (pivot,vlookup,...etc.) Visio, MS Project, Corel Draw, InDesign, HTML, SQL, VBA
    I couldn't understand the text highlighted in red.

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    Re: Please check my CV

    The system in knowledge is probably the best thing I had ever met.
    I enjoy reading code and recognizing patterns and correlations within it.

    Now I pay attention to those technical areas that have meaning for me and also I can create value with them.
    Now I focus on those professional topics and special areas of my profession, that I am interested in or passionate about.


    Originally Posted by hutoczki.jozsef
    General: Manufacturing process management, Theories of technology, Project management
    Economic: Logistics, Business Economics, System and cost evaluations, Management
    Professional: Evaluation of subjective data, Supplier systems,
    Quality tools and techniques, Management tools, Building and development of management systems, Modern techniques for making decisions




    What are you listing above?
    I listed my courses names. I translate them in a raw way. I can describe each record to translate it correctly.

    2008–2010: Typographic Publication Editor Certificate/Diploma? Light Industrial Technical College, ??? Town
    Diploma, and I wrote in the CV. for the town where the school was located.

    ImportantMajor subjects: Preparation of manufacturing, Quality Assurance, Internship.The professional exams approximately are 70%.
    Preparation of manufacturing
    : Make preparation and pre-activity that is necessary for the manufacturing process (orphans). For example calculations.
    The professional exams approximately are 70%.
    :My final-exam grade was 70%

    Billing Intern process invoices, record, make reports
    I entered invoice details into Excel and produced reports from the recorded data. That work was part of a paid internship.

    2015 Company Name – Part-time administration assistant. student work
    Organize, record and register Statements
    In this work in a small team we done a procedure, or activity which activity processing/elaborating/assimilating a statements/pronouncements/professions/manifestos/dictums/dictumtas/dictas/declarations.

    Ok
    ay. I type every improvement and I tried to describe each red colored sentences as much as possible. If any word is needed to be more described, please notify me. I made a commitment to English.
    Last edited by hutoczki.jozsef; 16-Feb-2016 at 22:37. Reason: Correcting

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    Re: Please check my CV

    Somebody would have an answer? Thank you.

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    Re: Please check my CV

    Quote Originally Posted by hutoczki.jozsef View Post
    I enjoy reading code pattern and recognizing patterns and correlations within it. inside a text.

    Now I focus on those professional topics and special parts areas of my profession, that I am interested in or passionate about.
    Quote Originally Posted by hutoczki.jozsef View Post
    I listened listed my courses' names. I translate it them in a raw way. I can describe each record to translate it correctly.
    I don't think you need to list those.

    Quote Originally Posted by hutoczki.jozsef View Post
    Diploma, and I write it to wrote ??? in the CV . ???: for the town where the school was located.
    OK

    Quote Originally Posted by hutoczki.jozsef View Post
    : Make preparation and pre-activity that is necessary for the manufacturing process (orphans). For example calculations.
    I still don't understand that.

    Quote Originally Posted by hutoczki.jozsef View Post
    : The My final-exam grade and the result of the Diploma is was 70%. (grade, rank, level).
    Quote Originally Posted by hutoczki.jozsef View Post
    In this work I was recorded entered invoice details into Excel ,so type into it. I was made and produced reports from the recorded data. And That work was part of a paid internship.
    Quote Originally Posted by hutoczki.jozsef View Post
    In this work in a small team we done a procedure, or activity which activity processing/elaborating/assimilating a statements/pronouncements/professions/manifestos/dictums/dictumtas/dictas/declarations.
    Use the original; it's easier to understand!

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