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    how to improve my opinion statement

    Was this shooting in LaLoche inevitable? These tragedies are not suppose to happen in Canada let alone Saskatchewan.

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    Re: how to improve my opinion statement

    You should add a comma after Canada.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: how to improve my opinion statement

    ***** NOT A TEACHER *****


    I believe that the word in your sentence should read "supposed."

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