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    MAIL REGARDING FOR HIRE A MANLIFT

    Dear,


    We hired a man lift for one day but that machine having some breakdown problem that's why we could not completed our task.

    One day we used only for two hour second day for 1 hour and third day means today also for two hour.

    So i want an impressive mail regarding for this so that the supplier will replace that machine and we will pay only for one day as we hired.


    BR
    Mohammad Shariq

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    Re: MAIL REGARDING FOR HIRE A MANLIFT

    Quote Originally Posted by shariq_ias View Post
    "Dear Mr/Mrs/Miss/Ms XXX,


    We hired a man lift (I don't know what this is) for one day but that the machine having suffered some breakdowns problem that's why and we could not completed complete our task [in only one day].

    One On the first day, we used it only for only two hours; on the second day for only one hour, and on the third day means (today) we also again used it for two hours.

    Because of the problems with the machine, we were unable to complete our work in one day and had to keep the machine for three days, even though we were able to use it for only five hours in total.

    We wish to ensure that we will be charged for only one day and we would like you to provide us with a machine in fully working order so that we can complete our work.

    Yours sincerely

    [Your name]"


    So I want an impressive mail regarding for this matter so that the supplier will replace that the machine and we will pay only for only one day as per the original contract. we hired.


    BR
    Mohammad Shariq
    See my suggested changes above. It seems very odd that you waited until day three to notify the hire company of the problem. You should have contacted them on day one when the machine broke down. Using the machine for three days and then asking them to charge you for only one day is very risky.

    Note that have no idea what a "man lift" is. Can you describe the machine you're talking about? If not, please post a photo of one.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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