Yunfu
New member
- Joined
- Dec 28, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- New Zealand
hi ,
I just practice my email skill to write a email after interview, and the purpose of this email is to express the strength and willing to work in this company. Will you please comment freely. thanks.:-D
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Hi F,
Hope this email finds you well. I am going to flight back to ** on 18[SUP]th[/SUP] Feb, and this email is wondering if I have the honour to get this offer from you, and then I will arrange the on board schedule ASAP.
After catch- up with John M on 4[SUP]th[/SUP] Feb, I have a profile on the business operation in S office, and I am ready to take this opportunity if possible. If I am lucky, I will start with capturing the information of operation process and product in mother company, then I would analyse the sales history of M, T,S ( from David, these countries will be took care by me), and I will plan to visit existing customers after knowing their background and demands and also seek other new business opportunities etc.
Although S office is small and full of challenge, it comes with chance as well if staff and operation here are stable enough. To be honest, I want to develop A business through this office, and want to service in S stably and humbly. I may not have rich experience in sales part, but I can learn, and willing to learn. Together with the self- motivation character, I am sure my previous experience and dairy operation experience would help me to adapt to this new position soon.
I can commence the job in April (prefer in the mid of April) if I can hear your decision soon. By then, I will get the p visa. And I have made an appointment for ** Visa application this September, so ** doesn’t need to worry about my legal visa in S.
Looking forward to hearing your decision soon and if you want to know me further, please don’t hesitate to contact.
Have a nice day!
Regards
Yunfu
I just practice my email skill to write a email after interview, and the purpose of this email is to express the strength and willing to work in this company. Will you please comment freely. thanks.:-D
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Hi F,
Hope this email finds you well. I am going to flight back to ** on 18[SUP]th[/SUP] Feb, and this email is wondering if I have the honour to get this offer from you, and then I will arrange the on board schedule ASAP.
After catch- up with John M on 4[SUP]th[/SUP] Feb, I have a profile on the business operation in S office, and I am ready to take this opportunity if possible. If I am lucky, I will start with capturing the information of operation process and product in mother company, then I would analyse the sales history of M, T,S ( from David, these countries will be took care by me), and I will plan to visit existing customers after knowing their background and demands and also seek other new business opportunities etc.
Although S office is small and full of challenge, it comes with chance as well if staff and operation here are stable enough. To be honest, I want to develop A business through this office, and want to service in S stably and humbly. I may not have rich experience in sales part, but I can learn, and willing to learn. Together with the self- motivation character, I am sure my previous experience and dairy operation experience would help me to adapt to this new position soon.
I can commence the job in April (prefer in the mid of April) if I can hear your decision soon. By then, I will get the p visa. And I have made an appointment for ** Visa application this September, so ** doesn’t need to worry about my legal visa in S.
Looking forward to hearing your decision soon and if you want to know me further, please don’t hesitate to contact.
Have a nice day!
Regards
Yunfu