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    #1

    cover letter

    To whom it may concern:

    I am intrested in pursuing the Hotel management internship with your company.Working as an intern at --------------------- offers the opportunity to enhance and shine my skills & gain worthfull experience.I belive that my education & carrier goals are good to fit for this position which is why I have amended my cv for your review.
    During my time at Swiss Education Groups SHMS,where I am earning PGD in Operations I have got to learn a lot from this country (Switzerland) which is the pioneer of hospitality.
    As the matter of fact I am lacking the previous experience in hospitality industry but my passion to work in hospitality & my motiovations blaze my soul to this industry that I can show my potential & that how enthausiastic I am to work in hospitality industry & proven my abilities that I am the right person who made up only for hospitality industry.

    Thank you for your time & consideration I would appricite the opportunity to talk to you.I hope that you will consider me for an appropriate position.
    Note:- I accept that Cv & cover letter is a important part of applyings jobs/internships in a professional way but I personally belive that my personal impression & entire body language will be work in more positive way for my potential employer & which is why I am very keen to show my energy & passion to my potential employer via face to face communication.

    Sinerely,

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    #2

    Re: cover letter

    Do you want your letter proofread? There's quite a lot of text there, but I will do the first couple of sentences. My suggestions are as follows:

    I am interested in pursuing the Hotel Management Internship with your company. Working as an intern at --------------------- offers me the opportunity to enhance and hone my skills as well as gain valuable experience.

    Sinerely -> Sincerely
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 14-Feb-2016 at 13:51. Reason: Deleting unnecessary quote.
    I'm a native English speaker - Not a teacher. UTB.

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    #3

    Re: cover letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Khuram View Post
    To whom it may concern:

    Dear XYZ,

    I am interested in pursuing the Hotel Management internship with your company. Working as an intern at --------------------- offers me the opportunity to enhance and shine hone my skills & as well as gain worthfull valuable practical experience.I believe that my education & carrier and career goals are good to fit make me a suitable candidate for this position which is why I have amended attached my CV for your review.

    During my time at the Swiss Education Group, SHMS, where I am earning PGD earned a Postgraduate Diploma in Operations, I have got to learn a lot I learned much from this country (Switzerland) which is the a pioneer of in hospitality.

    As the matter of fact, I am lacking lack the previous experience in the hospitality industry, but my passion to work in hospitality and my motiovations blaze my soul keen interest to work in this industry will ensure that I succeed if given the opportunity. that I can show my potential & that how enthausiastic I am to work in hospitality industry & proven my abilities that I am the right person who made up only for hospitality industry.

    Thank you for your time & consideration, and I would apprecite the opportunity to talk to you. I hope that you will consider me for an appropriate position.

    Note:- I accept that Cv & cover letter is a important part of applyings jobs/internships in a professional way but I personally belive that my personal impression & entire body language will be work in more positive way for my potential employer & which is why I am very keen to show my energy & passion to my potential employer via face to face communication.


    Yours sincerely,

    ABC
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    #4

    Re: cover letter

    Yes I need help in the whole cover letter!
    thankyou

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