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    #1

    Can someone please edit these two letter for me? Thank you

    {February 15, 2016
    To Whom it may concern:
    I, Sally Chan would like to request for three month stay in China to take care of my 80 year old mother, who is sick. A three month stay would allow me to spend some quality time with my mother and take care of her needs.
    Thank you,

    Sally Chan}

    {February 15, 2016
    To Whom it may concern:
    I, Sally Chan, authorized my mother, Sally Wong to add my name and my other personal information to any real estate property. If you have any questions, please contact me at my United States cell phone number: x-xxx-xxx-xxxx.
    Thank you,

    Sally Chan}

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    #2

    Re: Can someone please edit these two letter for me? Thank you

    Who are you addressing the first one to?

    For the second, I think you need a lawyer!

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    #3

    Re: Can someone please edit these two letter for me? Thank you

    Hi!

    The first letter is for the immigration officer.

    Thank you,
    Sally Chan

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    #4

    Re: Can someone please edit these two letter for me? Thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by money23 View Post
    February 15, 2016
    To Whom it may concern:
    I, Sally Chan, would like to request apply for a three-month stay in China to take care of my 80-year-old mother, who is sick. A three-month stay would allow me to spend some quality time with my mother and take care of her needs.
    Thank you,

    Sally Chan
    You should address the letter appropriately, e.g., "The Immigration Officer - Department of XYZ" or "The Immigration Officer - Embassy of XYZ."

    For your second letter, if you intend it as some kind of instruction, then use "authorize" (not "authorized"). However as I've indicated above, you should consult a lawyer for that.

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    #5

    Re: Can someone please edit these two letter for me? Thank you

    Thank you for your help and the advice.

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    #6

    Re: Can someone please edit these two letter for me? Thank you

    Immigration Officers don't work in embassies. You are probably addressing your letter to an "Entry Clearance Officer" or a "Visa Officer".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Can someone please edit these two letter for me? Thank you

    I believe you will be asking for a resident visa.

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