Bassim
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- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
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- Bosnia Herzegovina
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- Sweden
Would you please correct my mistakes in the following sentences? I am wondering which of these two sentences sounds better.
1. With his face of a brute, the lawyer could have passed as a criminal without his court dress.
2. With his face of a brute, and without his court dress, the lawyer could have passed as a criminal.
1. With his face of a brute, the lawyer could have passed as a criminal without his court dress.
2. With his face of a brute, and without his court dress, the lawyer could have passed as a criminal.