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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    I wish to correct my written email in best way!

    Dear John,

    I know I am selected for a position in your section and I really wish to know any development of my case?

    kind regards
    Viscky

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    #2

    Re: I wish to correct my written email in best way!

    I'm not sure what you're trying to ask. If you know you have been "selected for a position", that means you have been offered a job. What "case" are you asking about the developments with?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: I wish to correct my written email in best way!

    Say:

    I know I have been selected....

    Perhaps:

    Please keep me informed of any developments I need to know about.

    Your sentence as written is not a question, but you could make it one if you insist. Perhaps:

    Would you keep me informed of any developments?

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