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    a part of my resume

    A particular part of my CV that I need help. Are my sentences right?

    ACTIVITIES DONE:
     Three-month partnership with Petrochemical Research and Technology Co. (Arak Centre).
     Has completed courses on ASPEN PLUS, ASPEN HYSYS, HTRI and ASPEN BJAC in Falat Ghareh Development and Industry, National Petrochemical Company.
     Has completed a course on PFD and P&ID Design Principles in Falat Ghareh Development and Industry, National Petrochemical Company.
     Has completed a course on Process Data Sheets Preparation Principles in Falat Ghareh Development and Industry, National Petrochemical Company.
     Possess a certificate of Process Engineer from Falat Ghareh Development and Industry, National Petrochemical Company.


    --- Thanks in advance.

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    Re: a part of my resume

    Say:

    Part of my CV that I need help with

    I don't see any problems. (Be sure to capitalize only proper nouns.)

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    Re: a part of my resume

    Three-month partnership with Petrochemical Research and Technology Co. (Arak Centre).

    Are you sure about this? Or was it an attachment or an internship?


    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    Re: a part of my resume

    Remove "has" from before "completed". It "third-person-izes" you.

    Completed courses on... [because it is shorthand for "I completed courses on...]

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    Re: a part of my resume

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    Three-month partnership with Petrochemical Research and Technology Co. (Arak Centre).

    Are you sure about this? Or was it an attachment or an internship?


    Thank you for your comment. Yes. Actually it was an internship.
    At this time, I have another question. I spent 12 months in an institution for doing my master's research. what should I say about that if I want to mention it?
    For example: "twelve-month participation as MSc. student in ABC."

    Thanks in advance.
    Last edited by pouriatiz; 07-Apr-2016 at 18:19.

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    Re: a part of my resume

    Two things. An internship is not the same as a partnership. Say:

    I spent twelve months at ABC doing research for my master's degree.

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