Student or Learner
It would have surpised him if she had been angry or made a scene, or if she had cried; he could have copied with that; but her calmness frightened him.
Is the sentence above grammatically correct?
Please, correct all my mistakes. I should know English perfectly and if you show me my mistakes I will achieve my dream a little bit faster. A lot of thanks.
Not a teacher nor a native speaker.
Are you writing a novel?
(The sentence (with Rover's correction) is fine.)