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    Post Application letter for College Administration

    Dear Father's and Sisters

    am writing to apply for the Bachelor of Arts Degree. The degree from one of the respected College is my chance to enrich my knowledge and professional outgrowth.

    My country needs new ideas and young professionals and I want to be one of them, as a future leader of my community and country.

    After reading about the Bachelor of Arts Degree, i intend to study; Psychology first year, Literature second year and Political Science third year. I feel that I have finally found something really suited to my objectives and goals. I believe I am well suited to study this based on my commitment to uplift my community and more importantly the youth.
    I volunteered at some organizations within my community. Thusong Service Centre where I rendered my services as a Social Auxiliary Worker. I also volunteered at Kitsong learning Centre where I assisted learners with their homework and projects. I also gave counselling to learners that needed it.

    The knowledge I will receive in
    The B.A. will be applied in the future in order to be a professional. I could help individuals and teams to
    develop their own potential, to overcome their fears,
    obstacles and to achieve their goals. With your guidance, we all strive for
    positive changes in our society. The changes we want in society have to start with ourselves and NGOs that invloved in community work.

    In conclusion, I would like to say that I am
    eager to gain new experiences, improve my
    skills, confident that overall opportunity to
    study at St Augustine College will broaden my horizons and
    give me an opportunity to gain world class
    education and help me become an excellent
    world citizen.
    I would therefore, feel obliged to be able to
    secure admission in your prestigious university
    with full financial assistance and pursue my Bachelor of Arts course.

    Thank you very much for considering my
    application.

    Yours faithfully,

    Thamsi Dambuza

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    Re: Application letter for College Administration

    Welcome to the forum.

    Why have you addressed us/the recipients of the letter as "Fathers and Sisters"?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Hi

    I addressed the recipients as "Fathers, Sisters because it's Catholic College.
    I thought that is how you address them.

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    Re: Application letter for College Administration

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing to apply for the Bachelor of Arts degree offered by your respected College.

    Having read about the program for the degree, I intend to study Psychology in the first year, Literature in the second and Political Science in the third year. I feel that I have finally found something that really fits my objectives and goals. I believe I am well suited to study this course based on my commitment to serve my community and especially contribute to the development of young people in my country.

    I have done voluntary work at several organizations within my community. At the Thusong Service Centre, I was a Social Auxiliary Worker. I also volunteered at Kitsong Learning Centre, where I assisted learners with their homework and projects. I also gave counselling to learners that needed it.

    My career goal is to work in an NGO providing social/community services. The knowledge I will gain from this B.A. program will help me greatly in the future to be a skilled and successful professional in the community. I could help individuals and teams to develop their own potential, to overcome their fears, obstacles, to endeavour to achieve their goals and to strive for positive changes in our society. The changes we want in society have to start with ourselves.

    In conclusion, I would like to say that I am eager to gain new experiences and improve my skills, and I'm confident that the opportunity to study at St Augustine College will broaden my horizons and enable me to gain a world-class education as well as help me become a proactive world citizen. My country needs new ideas and young professionals, and I want to be one of them, as a future leader in my community and country.

    I would, therefore, be honoured to secure admission into your prestigious college with full financial assistance to pursue my Bachelor of Arts course.

    Thank you very much for considering my application.

    Yours faithfully,

    Thamsi Dambuza


    Note that I used "Dear Sir/Madam" in your letter as I would imagine that the administrative staff (even at a Catholic college) are likely to be lay people.

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    Re: Application letter for College Administration

    Hi

    Thank you so much for assisting me

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    Re: Application letter for College Administration

    You're welcome, Thamsi.
    Note that you don't need to write a post to thank someone on the forum. Just click the Thank/Like button to show your appreciation.

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