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    Question How to make perfect intro of your presentation?

    Hi, I need your help to write presentation intro in a attractive way.
    I have to give a presentation on "Courtesy" which is the part of 7 Cs in communication skills.
    I made intro but I think this is not perfect, can someone make it in a perfect way.

    "Hi, My name is edina and today i am doing BSCS and today I am here to give presentation on courtesy.
    I will try to give my best"

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    Re: How to make perfect intro of your presentation?

    Please correct the information in your profile. Both your native language and your current location appear to be incorrect.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Question Re: How to make perfect intro of your presentation?

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Please correct the information in your profile. Both your native language and your current location appear to be incorrect.
    Done Successfully.
    Please somebody help me :(

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    Re: How to make perfect intro of your presentation?

    I wouldn't use Hi- I would use Good morning/afternoon. I would also say and today I am going to give a presentation on courtesy.

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    #5

    Re: How to make perfect intro of your presentation?

    Quote Originally Posted by waseemak25 View Post
    Done Successfully.
    Please somebody help me :(
    Something must have gone wrong. Your profile still says your native language is English and your home country and current location are the UK.
    I am not a teacher.

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