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    Being volunteer in Espaces NGO gives me opportunity to participate in Art club meetings organize cultural meetings and promote interest in culture & develop youths's awareness about their own creative potential. I choose topics from traditional up to conceptual art which are challenging,unusual and inspiring,those that fill youths with passion.

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    Re: Check the text

    Say, Please check the text.
    “Every miserable fool who has nothing at all of which he can be proud, adopts as a last resource pride in the nation to which he belongs; he is ready and happy to defend all its faults and follies tooth and nail, thus reimbursing himself for his own inferiority.”

    — Arthur Schopenhauer

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    Re: Check the text

    Being a volunteer in Espaces NGO gives me the opportunity to participate in Art club meetings, organize cultural meetings,and promote interest in culture & and develop youths's awareness about their own creative potential. I choose topics ranging from traditional up to conceptual art, which are challenging, unusual and inspiring those that and fill youths with passion.
    I am not a teacher.

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    #4

    Re: Check the text

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    I choose topics ranging from traditional up to conceptual art, which are challenging, unusual and inspiring those that and fill youths with passion.
    I think the comma before 'which' can be omitted because the relative clause can be restrictive.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Check the text

    The comma should not be there. She chooses topics which are challenging ...
    She's not asserting that all topics from traditional up to conceptual art are challenging, etc.

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